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Dear Evan Milsap:
Today, while reading your article in the USU Statesman, it occurred to me that you may be interesting in writing a story highlighting the Cache Valley Area Investors Association. It would tie nicely into the article you wrote about Economist Mark Skousen who said, “Entrepreneurial sprit is what drives the economy” and what better way to harbor that entrepreneurial spirit than through financial independence.
As student enter and leave Utah State University they acquire many loans and debts. The debt-tackling skills that students will learn at CVAIA meeting are beneficial to their lives, not to mention your own. Your story could highlight Preston Parker, a well-known Utah State Professor and Cache Valley resident, who is a member of CVAIA. Your story might also include, students talking about what financial independence means to them, what they would do if they were financial independent, stats about student loans such as the average debt accumulated, years to pay off the debt, what they could have done with that money and so on.
If people learn the right mentality and approaches to investing, they can all be successful in what they desire. People should be able to spend their time doing something they love, not just a job that provides an income. Passive income largely makes this possible. There are many organizations with that stated goal of helping people understand the relationship between assets, liabilities, income, expenses. They practice the methods found in the ideologies of books including Rich Dad Poor Dad, The Wealthy Barber, The Millionaire Next Door, Atlas Shrugged, The Automatic Millionaire, and The Secret.
Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA) teaches people how to increase passive income. CVAIA embraces the Law of Attraction, Law of Abundance, and Law of Exchange. CVAIA began in August 2007 and now has members from many geological locations and from all walks of life. The members come together with the same belief: that education mitigates the risks of investing.
For additional materials on CVAIA, to set up an interview or for clarification please feel free to contact me.
Thank you for your time,
Paige Morgan
Paige.morgan@aggiemail.usu.edu
(801)369-3619
So a couple words need to change their tense, in the first sentence it should say interested not interesting. It's a draft though so mistakes like that are expected. Haha even more so if you are me.
ReplyDeleteJust in reading the first paragraph I am a little confused. If I were reading this not knowing what CVAIA is I would like you to explain it in the first paragraph.
It also seems a little long, I know its hard cause the boiler plates are really long but maybe some of the information could be compacted.
Sorry that felt really harsh, I hope it helps though.
I liked it! As Kandace said I would just give the CVAIA explanation in the first paragraph!
ReplyDeletedito. sounds good.look over tenses and format looks right!
ReplyDeletei like how you brought up the pitch but you should make it allele more simple. not as long, feet your ideas across faster